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Chapter 19 what did you think?

Post  Admin on Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:11 pm

So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment
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Post  datbred on Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:55 pm

Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment


the honest truth i didn't like it hated mostly but its the way of life but it still was a good chapter. Sad

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Post  KY on Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:53 am

Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment

Fantastic!!!! The basis of the story throughout seemed to be the love between Steven and Oliver. It was a long rough ride but really glad they finally got back together at the end. I enjoy all your stories.

BTW: When do you expect to complete College Bound and Life Happens (stopped at chapter 5 on Nifty) ?

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Post  GuiltyBreak on Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:16 am

It was good that Steven and Oliver are back together.
But I'm not particulary keen on how they reconciled.
I actually pictured a different situation but mehhhh... I guess I'll keep that on my imagination. xD

Really good chapter all the same.
It's good that Oliver still can't get over the fact that he wants Steven and Steven only.
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Post  Admin on Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:29 pm

KY wrote:
Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment

Fantastic!!!! The basis of the story throughout seemed to be the love between Steven and Oliver. It was a long rough ride but really glad they finally got back together at the end. I enjoy all your stories.

BTW: When do you expect to complete College Bound and Life Happens (stopped at chapter 5 on Nifty) ?

Before and After isn't over. there is still more to tell.
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Re: Chapter 19 what did you think?

Post  Andres on Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:47 am

Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment

I LOVED IT

Guess I won't have to carry through on my threat now haha

Now that I know they work I have a new one. STEVEN AND OLIVER SEX SCENE IN 20 OR IM THROUGH I SWEAR

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Post  KY on Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:35 pm


I also hope we get a little sexy scene with Oliver & Steven

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Post  datbred on Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:52 am

Andres wrote:
Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment

I LOVED IT

Guess I won't have to carry through on my threat now haha

Now that I know they work I have a new one. STEVEN AND OLIVER SEX SCENE IN 20 OR IM THROUGH I SWEAR

yeah a sex scene that represses what Oliver did to make things what they were. finally bring Steven to his right form of mind. (once a cheater always a cheater)

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Re: Chapter 19 what did you think?

Post  KY on Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:22 pm

datbred wrote:
Andres wrote:
Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment

I LOVED IT

Guess I won't have to carry through on my threat now haha

Now that I know they work I have a new one. STEVEN AND OLIVER SEX SCENE IN 20 OR IM THROUGH I SWEAR

yeah a sex scene that represses what Oliver did to make things what they were. finally bring Steven to his right form of mind. (once a cheater always a cheater)

And Tyler didn't cheat? He didn't even talk to Steven during or after the Hospital when Steven might have died. Ignored Steven, and Steven had to finally go to his house to confront him. At least the story gives us a reason for Oliver, the story continued to explain his regrets from almost the beginning.

So why is Tyler any better than Oliver? I think Tyler is the jerk, if he really was all "that", he would have been concerned about Steven getting hurt and not been so fast to cheat. Cheating with Mark even when Steven was at the cabin with him... now thats a jerk!!!!

At least the story gives Oliver's reason, a reason that many in High School struggle with when coming to grips with being gay. Gay Tyler cheated fast with another guy, multiple times when his BF is injured from an accident. What was horny Tyler's reason? Gay Oliver cheated, with a girl, because he was trying to figure out if he really was gay. The story then tells how he got trapped into the str8 relationship.

But the big difference between Stevn and Tyler vs Steven and Oliver, according to the story that is a Love for each other.

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Re: Chapter 19 what did you think?

Post  datbred on Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:49 pm

KY wrote:
datbred wrote:
Andres wrote:
Admin wrote:So i decided to skip the Summary , because well it's a pain haha . what did you think of 19 did you like it , hate it comment

I LOVED IT

Guess I won't have to carry through on my threat now haha

Now that I know they work I have a new one. STEVEN AND OLIVER SEX SCENE IN 20 OR IM THROUGH I SWEAR

yeah a sex scene that represses what Oliver did to make things what they were. finally bring Steven to his right form of mind. (once a cheater always a cheater)

And Tyler didn't cheat? He didn't even talk to Steven during or after the Hospital when Steven might have died. Ignored Steven, and Steven had to finally go to his house to confront him. At least the story gives us a reason for Oliver, the story continued to explain his regrets from almost the beginning.

So why is Tyler any better than Oliver? I think Tyler is the jerk, if he really was all "that", he would have been concerned about Steven getting hurt and not been so fast to cheat. Cheating with Mark even when Steven was at the cabin with him... now thats a jerk!!!!

At least the story gives Oliver's reason, a reason that many in High School struggle with when coming to grips with being gay. Gay Tyler cheated fast with another guy, multiple times when his BF is injured from an accident. What was horny Tyler's reason? Gay Oliver cheated, with a girl, because he was trying to figure out if he really was gay. The story then tells how he got trapped into the str8 relationship.

But the big difference between Stevn and Tyler vs Steven and Oliver, according to the story that is a Love for each other.

Tyler is no better than Oliver but I figure Tyler had a reasons (not saying any reason is good to cheat but if this was real life then hey might have happen)1.) he got to the hosptail only to hear his bf callin for his ex lover and by the nickname him and Steven shared. 2.)it seems when steven got well enough it was Oliver who was either grinning in Steven face or somwhere around like a lost pet.(shoulda gave dude the space to move on rather hang around) 3.) following the storyline I believe steven and Oliver shared a moment in the woods when they were lost. And did Steven go running back to tell Tyler that he spent the night in Oliver arms? No it only came out when Steven throw his little hissy fit.(even at the cabin Tyler had to see Oliver push up on Steven)


You right when most guys are that age its hard to figure out what you really want but I believe when you gave someone your heart it belongs to them and them only rather have second thoughts when you want to try something different. He (Oliver) should have gone to Steven and asked or broken up then it wouldn't have been cheating. And following the story again Steven asked Oliver in the start if the relationship (they had)is what he wanted or something else and Oliver replied that Steven was all he wanted. Maybe Steven won't have taking it hard if Oliver would have cheated with a guy because he could complete but when Amanda enter the picture how could Steven really compair with her?

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