Chapter 23 ! what did you think?

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Chapter 23 ! what did you think?

Post  Admin on Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:47 pm

So much happened

from Tyler having a dream about Steven
Steven having a dream of Oliver
Janie telling Steven of her crazy boyfriend
Steven telling Oliver that Cooper is Justin's father
Oliver and Tyler stopping their feud and Tyler Calling Mark out
also there is a secret between them
Oliver tells Owen he is gay and Owen already knows
causing the three brothers to bond

but As Oliver gets the strength from his brother to come out to his mom , he does so and also tells her of his father cheating she kicks him out with the help if his father . cooper tells Oliver he is going to help and when cooper goes back in the house for his wallet and keys Oliver leaves . he heads to Stevens house and Steven Sense something is wrong and Oliver tells him what happened Steven explains to his parents what happened , they allow him to stay with them .

meanwhile Janie goes to The Greysons house and she tells cooper that Justin is his son , his mother overhears this and tells Janie she wont get a cent from them. Janie and Justin leaves , while Cooper is standing there shocked .

what what did you think
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Re: Chapter 23 ! what did you think?

Post  Zach Astra on Tue Sep 21, 2010 4:18 pm

Can't wait for what happens next! I love it now they are living together, but I hate Oliver's mom very much for being homophobic. Don't stop making chapters for Before and After cause I got addicted to this story so much!! You always made me curious of what happens next..

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Post  Admin on Tue Sep 21, 2010 4:37 pm

Zach Astra wrote:Can't wait for what happens next! I love it now they are living together, but I hate Oliver's mom very much for being homophobic. Don't stop making chapters for Before and After cause I got addicted to this story so much!! You always made me curious of what happens next..

Thanks Zach for reading , i have no plans to End Before and After yet , i'm giving this series the Television series Treatment" refuring to it as Episodes and breaking them up into seasons , and the finale for season 2 will be explosive.
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Re: Chapter 23 ! what did you think?

Post  Zach Astra on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:03 am

Your welcome, and awesome! Can't wait to read the upcoming episodes!

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