What did you think of ch 1
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Very promising story outline
Hey, just read the first chapter of TAOA over at nifty.org and liked it very much :-)
I liked the way they interact, without it immediately ending up in hook up - though the promise is it not taking much to end up there indeed. What I would personally like to see is the relationship developing slowly as Adam and Aiden start knowing each other better.
I liked the way they interact, without it immediately ending up in hook up - though the promise is it not taking much to end up there indeed. What I would personally like to see is the relationship developing slowly as Adam and Aiden start knowing each other better.
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