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What did you think of Ch 20!

Post  Admin on Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:25 pm

Tell me what you thought of 20. Very Happy
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Re: What did you think of Ch 20!

Post  datbred on Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:58 pm

Admin wrote:Tell me what you thought of 20. Very Happy


where is chapter 20 posted? The wait is killing me (even if I'm not a happy reader)

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Re: What did you think of Ch 20!

Post  datbred on Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:36 am

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Admin wrote:Tell me what you thought of 20. Very Happy


where is chapter 20 posted? The wait is killing me (even if I'm not a happy reader)

I found it yea me....good chapter but it would have been great if Steven or Oliver won't have had to use other people jus to find their way bac to each other.Something still stink in the city don't know what it is but something jus don't seem right.With Steven and Oliver bac together it's to early in the story regardless its like something missing....maybe i'm lost.

Can someone anwser why Steven forgave everyone but Tyler? Because if you can forgive your bestfriend who turned his bac on you when you needed him the most....and you can forgive a guy who jus used you for sex then dropped you like a sack of bricks....and you can forgive your boyfriend who slept with someone who you can't compete with.....then turn around and forgave the girl whom your ex boyfriend/boyfriend slept with? ADAM WAS RIGHT ABOUT STEVEN HE IS SELFISH AND ONLY WANTED OLIVER BAC BECAUSE HE COULDN'T FIND ANOTHER. I know the whole story is based on Steven and Oliver's love for each other but come on it's like a fairy tale( really hate saying that) you can pretty much sum up the rest of the story.

I feel bad for Adam he's been used twice and seem to keep falling for losers and people who wants to get bac at other people only to find his heart broken again and again.


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Great chapter dude!!

Post  Drakeme on Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:38 pm

I love that Steven and Oliver decided to give their relationship another try. i feel like Steven was trying to move on from Oliver but the other relationships didn't last because they weren't right for Steven. it's like when your with someone you love and then you break up . it's kind of hard to find what you once had. i am pleased with how the story turned out so far and i cant wait to learn about Lucas and Devin and i want to know if your going to put Spencer with someone because he seems really hot to me haha! Very Happy
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