What did you think of ch 17!

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What did you think of ch 17!

Post  Admin on Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:43 am

The chapter begins with Spencer and Steven talking about Oliver and Adam , Spencer encourage Steven to fight for his man , but Steven doesnt think he has the right to. once Spencer walks away mark comes and tries to talk to steven but steven declines to that and tells MArk to leave him alone words are exchanged and then physical contact is involved , Oliver tries to stop it but a kick to the groin area by Steven stops it .

later Amanda decides to throw a party and invites everyone . she has her eye set on a football player named Lucas Brant . but with the arrival of new comer Devin , they get side swept by his gorgeousness including the very Straight Lucas , Amanda notice Lucas interest in Devin and questions it ,


at the party , amanda comes on to lucas but he kind of let her down she goes off dancing with another boy he on the other hand see's Devin in the den by himself and goes in there with him they sit together and talk there is a definite attraction with the two just as things are about to get interesting , amanda comes and kissed Lucas when they stop kissing Devin is gone she then wants to show Lucas on a private tour of her room . again he declines. she calls him out on being gay . he denies and and calls her a bitch and leave

on the other side of the party Spencer is still encouraging Steven to do something about tyler as they look at him and adam talking . Steven tells him no and goes for fresh air . he is joined by Adam who tells Steven to stop staring at Oliver Steven tells him to go away , Adam pushes Steven to far and Steven lashes out with words only for Oliver to come in and hear it . Oliver tells Steven to not talk to Adam like that Steven gets upset and leaves he runs into Devin and Apologize for the lunch room incident Devin forgives and ask him is everything is alright Steven replies " I don’t know yet all I know is life is crazy you never know what can happen" . Spencer walks Steven to his car and gives him Advice: "listen to your heart , let it guide you ,but think as well with your brain"

Oliver feels bad about yelling at Steven but needs to move on but its hard when Steven is all he thinks about

and The meeting with Spencer and Steven at infer-red the next day gets Spence to open up about his past relationships but also give Steven an idea to make Mark pay for all the things he has done . he tells Spencer to make mark fall in love with him , Spence says no and Steven explain why he hates mark , Spence being a good friend excepts the plan.

So what did you think of Epi or ch 17... let me know bounce
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Re: What did you think of ch 17!

Post  Drakeme on Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:53 pm

Admin wrote:The chapter begins with Spencer and Steven talking about Oliver and Adam , Spencer encourage Steven to fight for his man , but Steven doesnt think he has the right to. once Spencer walks away mark comes and tries to talk to steven but steven declines to that and tells MArk to leave him alone words are exchanged and then physical contact is involved , Oliver tries to stop it but a kick to the groin area by Steven stops it .

later Amanda decides to throw a party and invites everyone . she has her eye set on a football player named Lucas Brant . but with the arrival of new comer Devin , they get side swept by his gorgeousness including the very Straight Lucas , Amanda notice Lucas interest in Devin and questions it ,


at the party , amanda comes on to lucas but he kind of let her down she goes off dancing with another boy he on the other hand see's Devin in the den by himself and goes in there with him they sit together and talk there is a definite attraction with the two just as things are about to get interesting , amanda comes and kissed Lucas when they stop kissing Devin is gone she then wants to show Lucas on a private tour of her room . again he declines. she calls him out on being gay . he denies and and calls her a bitch and leave

on the other side of the party Spencer is still encouraging Steven to do something about tyler as they look at him and adam talking . Steven tells him no and goes for fresh air . he is joined by Adam who tells Steven to stop staring at Oliver Steven tells him to go away , Adam pushes Steven to far and Steven lashes out with words only for Oliver to come in and hear it . Oliver tells Steven to not talk to Adam like that Steven gets upset and leaves he runs into Devin and Apologize for the lunch room incident Devin forgives and ask him is everything is alright Steven replies " I don’t know yet all I know is life is crazy you never know what can happen" . Spencer walks Steven to his car and gives him Advice: "listen to your heart , let it guide you ,but think as well with your brain"

Oliver feels bad about yelling at Steven but needs to move on but its hard when Steven is all he thinks about

and The meeting with Spencer and Steven at infer-red the next day gets Spence to open up about his past relationships but also give Steven an idea to make Mark pay for all the things he has done . he tells Spencer to make mark fall in love with him , Spence says no and Steven explain why he hates mark , Spence being a good friend excepts the plan.

So what did you think of Epi or ch 17... let me know bounce

Great Chapter , i really enjoy this story i do think of this as a tv show because it is a lot better then some of the stuff on t.v . for some reason i dont like Adam . idk cant wait for Episode 18 Laughing
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Re: What did you think of ch 17!

Post  KY on Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:09 am

Good Chapter. Steven and Oliver are driving me nuts,,,, arrrgh. LOL

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