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Post  Admin on Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:38 pm

In Chapter 14 , Steven calls everyone out on their bull shit . this really is a Can't miss chapter. because no one will be innocent , also something about Tyler is Revealed to everyone?????????////
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Post  Andres on Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:35 pm

So do you already have 14 written cuz if you do post it tomorrow I don't want to wait!!! Smile

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I'm not a happy reader....

Post  datbred on Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:23 am

I don't even know where to begin....it seems Steven got a little boost out of tellin his friends off. Or somewhat called friends.I just don't understand why Tyler had to be a cheater and why couldn't he just be normal. Why couldn't Mark and Oliver hook up? Seem likes everyone is getting it on all but Josh. Maybe bestfriends should tested the waters and see where the ship sails.

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Post  Andres on Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:30 am

Steven and Oliver back together. NOW! Smile

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Post  Admin on Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:48 am

datbred wrote:I don't even know where to begin....it seems Steven got a little boost out of tellin his friends off. Or somewhat called friends.I just don't understand why Tyler had to be a cheater and why couldn't he just be normal. Why couldn't Mark and Oliver hook up? Seem likes everyone is getting it on all but Josh. Maybe bestfriends should tested the waters and see where the ship sails.

Hey I'm sorry your not a happy reader . but i just want you and everyone else to know . i wrote majority of this story before i even posted the first chapter so a lot of this was going to happen regardless. Yeah Tyler cheated , but i wouldn't blame Tyler it was all Mark , mark was the one who manipulated the Situation. i cant give to much away but i can say is that Steven will get his revenge on Mark. as far as Steven and Tyler go I don't know if they will ever get back together . the thing is Tyler didn't only cheat that one time he did it after they got back together and had sex numerous of times . and yeah Steven fooled around with Oliver which was wrong . but Tyler was wrong way before Steven and Oliver did anything.
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Post  datbred on Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:07 pm

Andres wrote:Steven and Oliver back together. NOW! Smile

Yeah right,He used him like before(getting his rocks off) and soon as they were in the house a good sec he was suckin face with Adam. Evil or Very Mad Arrow

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Post  datbred on Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:26 pm

Admin wrote:
datbred wrote:I don't even know where to begin....it seems Steven got a little boost out of tellin his friends off. Or somewhat called friends.I just don't understand why Tyler had to be a cheater and why couldn't he just be normal. Why couldn't Mark and Oliver hook up? Seem likes everyone is getting it on all but Josh. Maybe bestfriends should tested the waters and see where the ship sails.

Hey I'm sorry your not a happy reader . but i just want you and everyone else to know . i wrote majority of this story before i even posted the first chapter so a lot of this was going to happen regardless. Yeah Tyler cheated , but i wouldn't blame Tyler it was all Mark , mark was the one who manipulated the Situation. i cant give to much away but i can say is that Steven will get his revenge on Mark. as far as Steven and Tyler go I don't know if they will ever get back together . the thing is Tyler didn't only cheat that one time he did it after they got back together and had sex numerous of times . and yeah Steven fooled around with Oliver which was wrong . but Tyler was wrong way before Steven and Oliver did anything.



It's cool I'm still enjoying the story.But I think Oliver is playing everyone for a fool.(even though the storyline has been written.Rewrites anyone?) Just going sit back and see how thing plays out. Can't give up on a good story that fast dude. Keep doing what you do and I'll be a reader for life. Very Happy Very Happy (Still say Tyler was a good dude,it's wasn't until when he felt second to Oliver that he made bad choices. Its hard to play second when you are suspose to be first.) Hopefully by the time school starts everyone would be acting like young adult instead of CHILDREN.

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Post  Drakeme on Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:08 pm

datbred wrote:
Andres wrote:Steven and Oliver back together. NOW! Smile

Yeah right,He used him like before(getting his rocks off) and soon as they were in the house a good sec he was suckin face with Adam. Evil or Very Mad Arrow

datbred, you really like the Whole Tyler and Steven pairing and hate Oliver . i guess that's good writing because i never liked Tyler , i knew he was too good to be true . we all finally see his flaws he is just like every other selfish guy. at least with Oliver , yeah he cheated but once he did, that was the end of the relationship. but with Tyler he got back together with Steven and still was doing Mark. why is that??. don't get me wrong i think Tyler was a very Solid character but he lost his Halo in my eyes. and Oliver to me is what a lot of young people face on a daily basis. he was scared i know the feeling and when your scared you will do and try anything to make yourself fit in or feel normal. so i commend Oliver on realizing he will never be happy living to other peoples expectations....
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Post  datbred on Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:39 pm

Drakeme wrote:
datbred wrote:
Andres wrote:Steven and Oliver back together. NOW! Smile

Yeah right,He used him like before(getting his rocks off) and soon as they were in the house a good sec he was suckin face with Adam. Evil or Very Mad Arrow

datbred, you really like the Whole Tyler and Steven pairing and hate Oliver . i guess that's good writing because i never liked Tyler , i knew he was too good to be true . we all finally see his flaws he is just like every other selfish guy. at least with Oliver , yeah he cheated but once he did, that was the end of the relationship. but with Tyler he got back together with Steven and still was doing Mark. why is that??. don't get me wrong i think Tyler was a very Solid character but he lost his Halo in my eyes. and Oliver to me is what a lot of young people face on a daily basis. he was scared i know the feeling and when your scared you will do and try anything to make yourself fit in or feel normal. so i commend Oliver on realizing he will never be happy living to other peoples expectations....


I don't really hate Oliver.I know what its like to be a confused teenager and try to fit in also.But once I started to love myself more then I could careless of what people or my peers thought.To me once you say you love a person and you hold that love deep down in your heart how can you go against that? and that whole Tyler and Steven thing yeah i liked it and Tyler's no angel in my eyes anymore.But after hearing your boyfriend/lover call out his ex's name it tears sumthing away from you.and he wanted to tell Steven about it but he was like all he had time was for Oliver and I felt like he(Steven) use Tyler just for sex and once it (the mishappening with tyler and mark) was all out in the open instead of faceing it he lashed out trying to save face. and like i said once before they are at a time in ther life where they need to stop acting like CHILDREN and started acting like Young Adults they are becoming. Idea

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