What did you think of ch 1

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What did you think of ch 1

Post  Admin on Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:39 am

let me know ! thanx
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Very promising story outline

Post  adi87 on Tue Oct 05, 2010 11:07 am

Hey, just read the first chapter of TAOA over at nifty.org and liked it very much :-)

I liked the way they interact, without it immediately ending up in hook up - though the promise is it not taking much to end up there indeed. What I would personally like to see is the relationship developing slowly as Adam and Aiden start knowing each other better. Very Happy

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